Behind Those Clouded Eyes - plz edit &/or comment!
I wish I knew what makes your world bright,
What makes you laugh and grin?
I wish I knew how to appease you.
Your heart I crave to win.
Where are your thoughts when your gaze lingers?
What be your goals? Your dreams?
I suspect a past behind those clouded eyes.
All a secret, to me, it seems.
What makes you sad, so disappointed,
That you seek the darkness to cry in?
I’d do anything to alleviate the pain,
And exposing emotion’s no sin.
I’m longing and aching for you to just trust me,
To make our connection more true.
How much longer will my attempts be in vain?
Each failure breaking my heart anew.
How can you do it all on your own?
I await the day you let me in.
I long to appreciate, to understand,
This mystery-world you live in.
What makes you laugh and grin?
I wish I knew how to appease you.
Your heart I crave to win.
Where are your thoughts when your gaze lingers?
What be your goals? Your dreams?
I suspect a past behind those clouded eyes.
All a secret, to me, it seems.
What makes you sad, so disappointed,
That you seek the darkness to cry in?
I’d do anything to alleviate the pain,
And exposing emotion’s no sin.
I’m longing and aching for you to just trust me,
To make our connection more true.
How much longer will my attempts be in vain?
Each failure breaking my heart anew.
How can you do it all on your own?
I await the day you let me in.
I long to appreciate, to understand,
This mystery-world you live in.
posted by yoniQua at 2:08 PM
7 Comments:
great poem darlin, id leave out a few words maybe... but ill tell you when we sit next to eachother next stealing wireless :-)
I dont understand your analysis. First of all, who said its a guy-girl relationship? And how by the subject having a mysterious life to the author, make the author an enigma? And what about the author makes her craved?
hi.
did you get the package
me
which?
hey niQ
i really like the poem.. very interpretive. on this one paragraph:
"Where are your thoughts when your gaze lingers?
What be your goals? Your dreams?
I suspect a past behind those clouded eyes.
All a secret, to me, it seems."
i like the part what be your goals... but the end "all a secret, to me, it seems" is kinda sketchy
i didnt know you were a poet
We sent the package today...
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thanks guys but i never heard bout this package - just two that i have to pick up from j.town. one from moshe and one from a MSY girl... is it something else??? ooohhh im excited... email me, btw.
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